I am....

an experiment: Tell me if you get any of this.

I am:

The hider in the shadows come and find me:
Nemo
The lies of the drug you've been supplied by me:

Placebo
The hurt you feel inside when you breathe:
Wind Pain
The person you wished you'd never see:
It's Bush again
The war that has torn the world apart:
Risk
The striking blow directly to your heart:
A cyst
The facebook and myspace of your personality:
fake
The time you said you loved her in the back alley:
A mistake
The fact that you can't get a job:
Recession
The gloom that reduces you to an ink blob:
Depression
The hate you feel when your cell phone rings:
Anti-Social
The fact that with sadness no tears bring:
Non-Emotional
The fight you just couldn't mutter up:
Mindset
The time you did that awesome belly flop:
Do you know where the lights went?
The feeling in your gut you have to quit:
Low self esteem
The reason those jeans just won't fit:
Extra Bacon, Cheese and Cream
The time you did that embarrassing thing:
A*****e!
The moment someone heard you singing:
Sad--oh
The cleanest hit Tyson took in the ring:
Sham-WOW
That burger you had at Burger King:
you sure it's Cow?

I am...
The bringer of destruction and all things bad:
hell's fury
the reason when you get old why they sag:
gravity
The reason why Victoria has a secret:
Female Deception
The reason why M. Night Shyamalan is at his weakest:
Inception
The thought that thoughts can make life different:
The Secret
The reason why Malcolm didn't finish it:
His meekness
The fact that you spent your last five on the lottery:
wishful thinking
The reason they're taking aware you property:
Attractive Loaning

I am...
Tripping over dreams and about to fall:
Niagra
Popping pills and trying to rise to the call:

Viagra
Pushing forward like water in a stream:
Tidal Wave
Discarding tight colored pants and rapper dreams:
Fashion Craves
Trying to keep my floors clean:
Swiffer
Cutting through the negative and mean:
Jack the Ripper
Attempting to mount my horse:
Seabiscuit
Letting my legend run it's course:
Jet Li's kick
running towards that light,
Nike
realizing I can obtain flight,
Kite
Recording all that I have done:
Tivo
Leaving this blueprint when I'm done:
Label 'Hero'


I am...
Not dead and not without purpose:
Zombie?
A broken egg that will reach the top:
Humpty?
Not about to quit like the rest:
Energizer
Determined to past this test:
Exam Advisor

I am...
Regretful-less, Fixed and driven:
Evil Kinevil
A ray of light, direction and no longer a prison:
Shawshank redemtion
I am rabid and untamed, hungry:
have a snickers
I am 6 foot, strong and a badass ranger:
Chuck Norris hater


I am darkness from light:
the bathroom light,
I am relief from pain:
the urine drain
I am the one who works clean:
like the flush that came
I am the honest man:
wash your hands again

I am, and forever will be, the reason to change:
The one without a name.
I am, that fragment of self:
It's time you know that you're insane.

I am the guardian of the night:
I'm Batman---they're more Luis Lane
I am the reason they've cheaten:
the Scatman, the quick talker, the chain.

I am, I can, I will be and I was:
Linguistics of all the above,
I am the granter of your dreams:
I am the Wizard of your Oz.

I am:
simply put,
the feeble being of faith.
I am,
without a doubt,
a grain of salt on the plate.
I am the starting fee:
I AM:
Me.


So who the hell are you?

Author's Note

Weird, i know right. hard to get in sync...

Reviews

[Cassie316]

This is a really interesting write. not gunna lie, I LOVE the way you wrote it, and I definitely felt like I got in sync with it. I'm not sure what you meant in this poem, but this is what I got: That people.... mostly in the U.S., a material country, have a hard time finding their own identity, and they try to place it on things in the media... which highly influences us all.... and it's insane not knowing exactly who you are.

[Dareen]

Not weird, just the first of its kind (first and not only because I'll be writing [or trying to write] poems like this...)
Really good.

[koty bell]

interesting yet great nice job!!!

[Graceful]

so amazing. really well doen! bravo! can't wait for more poems!

[Ted Lambert]

Talent, brother, (or sister), talent. Nice word usements (Steve Martin, LA Story, 1991.

[nothing]

Veryyyyyy nice. I love this one. I was actually laughing at a couple of parts to where I thought I'd cry just from how you worded it. You write very well. You should write more like these!! Cute!! :D

Truly Yours,
Sarah G. Whiteman

[Lilly]

An interesting and clever write...nice

[Creep]

This is truly a clever piece! I love it. It seems so random but it's random thoughts we all can associate with. Remarkable. ;)