Oxytocin

Oxytocin

A Poem by boyinblue
"

exactly what it is...

"
Love is...
a series of bio-chemical reactions,
equivalent to the consumption
of large quantities of chocolate.

There is a reason why "Hersey's" are called "Kisses".

© 2010 boyinblue


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boyinblue
Commit to memory and never forget.

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I like this, I think its delightful and so true. Endorphins are flowing in both situations that makes a person feel good and the part about Hershey's calling those candies kisses, I think you just might be right.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Those first two lines are just glorious. I'm even feeling you, maybe, with the next two. But the last line just doesn't work for me... it takes it from somewhere that could potentially be really honest and makes it sort of saccharine and silly.

Can those first two lines make their way into another poem? I'd love to see them there....

Posted 14 Years Ago


hard but the perfect calculation with chemistry,you can calculate your moments as chemical reactions.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 10, 2010
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boyinblue
boyinblue

Trinidad and Tobago



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