Matter and Chatter

haiku for the contest.

If all there is
comes through these eyes
then could not all I desire, leave them?

Author's Note

thoughts about reality. I sound soo stupid writing 3 lines to sum up my thoughts. lol, but that`s haiku I guess.

Reviews

nah, you don't sound stupid.
one reason I like reading a haiku is because the people writing them seem so damned smart, getting their point across in only 3 lines, haha.

[Lyr J. Thirsk]

A short, succint, piercing style and point. Good job!

its good that you elaborated your thoughts in short lines

[Alexa Tasch]

actually it sounds very nice and meaningful