ode to kali

she washed herself with vinegar

to bleach away the stain.

she washed herself with vinegar 

she washed away the pain.

she washed away the loneliness

washed till everythings the same.

washed away the tears

and everyone to blame.

she couched her self in viciousness

and vicious became her name.

she lusted after bitterness

and fell in love with pain.

she couched herself in righteousness,

revenge becomes the game.

shes a ghost upon your consciousness,

a cold wind upon the plain.

she payed it forward from behind

too early it was late,

and if u whisper "i dont mind"

she'll swear that your prostate.

she washed herself with vinegar

deep within the  scars,

dressed herself in bitterness

and blew out all the stars.

she ate the world and all its hate

in one single chew,

on on this spur without deliberate

devoured the universe too

till all twas left in time and space

is a broken memory of you.

she built a world of memories

bitter memories of you

and bowed the world to compensate - 

the debt to her twas due

she cleansed her self in visciousness

and vicious was her name.

Author's Note

please forgive the punctuation :)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful poem that inspired me to write my own version http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/SoulCrusader/744899/
Glad she finally published.

Top write:)

[frozensakura]

i like the flow :) hehe good write, keep it up