Look at her

Look at her
Cut up, broken
Abandoned

Look at her
Cry and scream
Clawing at her face
What a disgrace

"how beautiful"
"your so cute"
look again in the damn mirror
It always proves you wrong

The girl they see
She's nothing like me
Why can't they tell us apart?

Is being free
Such a tragedy 
I guess that's what they mean

Reviews

[Echo Nightfield]

A lot of easily connectable emotion here. I, myself, can relate all too well. I can't really take compliments myself.

However, just to be constructive (not destructive, I promise) I would like to see the sentences in the quotations start off capitalized and using the proper English spelling. ( i.e You're instead of your) I don't really like text typing in anyplace other then texting but I'm just old fashioned I guess.

Beautifully written though. Good job girls!

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Nice...

[TheSweet]

This is profound in the way it understands the different language people use on themselves against other people. Thanks for sharing :)

[Castonovia]

Soooo, true!!! Appearances aren't always what they appear and so on... two sides can reside inside that even the ones closest can't tell apart. It relates;)

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice work!!

[Brittni]

You write so strongly, and I truly enjoy your work. I just wish I had more time to write the proper reviews that your work deserves. Very well done!

[Ripple of Aqua]

It's so true; people like to see what they want; never always what's in front of them. It's frustrating, infuriating, and sad. If only, if only...

[Shadow Spirit]

Many people nowadays refuse to see through the facade.

[Clever Forever]

Wow, I really love this. It's amazing - again another one people can relate too.

[Roze Collions]

you see whats there fully because you also feel within they cannot

[Calypso]

This makes sense. I see "how beautiful your so cute" being said by someone who is trying to help.
The rest of the poem is what she thinks inside her head.
Well done