She is...

She Isn't some outstandingly beautiful girl
Or someone striving for perfection
Her face isn't caked in makeup

Why hide away her imperfections
When she knows she has flaws?

she's insecure

Quiet
unnoticed 
But always giving her all 

Holding onto the love she's been fortunately given
Holding on to the little things in life that make her happy 
Her family, her friends, and of corse... the one she loves the most

If only he'd open his eyes and see
She's tried all her life to be
everything he'll ever want and need

If only he'd see...
How much he means to me

Author's Note

Well yea.. :/
Will he ever notice how much she loves him?
Is being loved and cared for such a bad thing..?

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You touch a subject with questions and emotions within this poem that many go through. Nice write, especially like this part:
"Why hide away her imperfections
When she knows she has flaws? "

[Japanese Cherry]

wonderful job. i enjoyed reading this

[Spookers]

This reminds me of that Taylor Swift song "You Belong With Me". Your writing has a nice flow to it and i liked it very much. It portrays the typical teenage girl very well. Good job.

[Melissa Edmunds]

This is wonderful. Thank you for sharing..

[frozensakura]

thanks!!

[Rhianne Ney]

You're great, Ms. Athena... I have a friend who's like that to and the guy was quite rude to her saying something mean and giving his number only to say he don't want to reply....

[frozensakura]

thanks !!

[littlered1819]

its a really sweet and nice poem and could be a brilliant basis for a short story x

[frozensakura]

thanks !!

[Bone and Brine]

Beautiful.

[frozensakura]

thanks !!

[VelvetRosetta]

Being Humble and true to yourself is a gift...everyone has flaws but whats most important is our insides, not sure if he will ever notice but one day he might regret it if he doesnt.

[Peaceworker22]

"and of corse" I think you meant "course". It's funny how this happens for guys too, I'm all too familiar with this kind of scenario. Good work, and I think it's great when a woman barely uses any makeup or none at all. :)

[frozensakura]

thanks!

[Peaceworker22]

No trouble at all, the pleasure is all mine. : )

[Beck Louise]

This is a great poem :) I love this the person is willing to be completely herself, and no matter how little she has, appreciates it, giving her all to someone who has yet to notice her brilliance. great work :)

[frozensakura]

thanks!