I try
A Poem by
frozensakura
what if i wanted to change?
change into somebody else?
what would i do?
what could i do...
i no longer know myself
im fed up with playing pretend
ill try
to find out who "myself" is
i no longer understand
when and why i let myself cry
tears of many things
regrets and lonliness
ill try
to hide them away
wounds inside and out
scars that have leave me with no doubt
i see blood flow
that ceasts to end
i try
to act as if there no longer real
with all these thoughts in my head
i try but have no reason why
i cant go on
but ill try to live life
and act as everything is alright
© 2011 frozensakura
Author's Note
on mi mind nd felt like writing -athena
Reviews
Great Great Great! Good write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's good to get out the pen and just go for it, though it is a wee bit sad.
Interesting... your bit of "day dreaming".
*bird*
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's good to get out the pen and just go for it, though it is a wee bit sad.
Interesting... your bit of "day dreaming".
*bird*
very good write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
very good write!
nice write
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice write
i like it good work
Posted 13 Years Ago
i like it good work
Very nice poem, full of emotions. You kept me reading until the last stanza. It was truly wonderful. Well done.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very nice poem, full of emotions. You kept me reading until the last stanza. It was truly wonderful. Well done.
It's never good to hold it all in... I know for a fact this is true, because I do it. Everyday, every moment, every second. I've always bottled things away and tucked them away in my mind, but in the end it's a terrible thing to do. In the middle of my 5th hour class, I had a mental breakdown. I was reading a book, which I do alot, and something in it reminded me about my emotional distress about my father's death. It's a terrible feeling to just burst into tears, hyperventilate, and try not to look around and see if everyone is staring at you like you feel. Please, I know you don't know me very well, but I would never ever wish it upon my worst enemy, so please, please, if you feel you need to do this, then talk to me. Send me a message, comment on my page and I'll message you. It doesn't matter, just don't hold it in to everyone.
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's never good to hold it all in... I know for a fact this is true, because I do it. Everyday, every moment, every second. I've always bottled things away and tucked them away in my mind, but in the end it's a terrible thing to do. In the middle of my 5th hour class, I had a mental breakdown. I was reading a book, which I do alot, and something in it reminded me about my emotional distress about my father's death. It's a terrible feeling to just burst into tears, hyperventilate, and try not to look around and see if everyone is staring at you like you feel. Please, I know you don't know me very well, but I would never ever wish it upon my worst enemy, so please, please, if you feel you need to do this, then talk to me. Send me a message, comment on my page and I'll message you. It doesn't matter, just don't hold it in to everyone.
i enjoyed the 4th stanza... this was good emotion and strong, good questions, nice write
Posted 13 Years Ago
i enjoyed the 4th stanza... this was good emotion and strong, good questions, nice write
what do u think of negative reviews? (random) well, interesting it is simple like Kenneth the Geek said (did he mean to put Greek?) probably not
it's not professional or anything but.....anywayz I'm not too into poems so you know
Posted 13 Years Ago
what do u think of negative reviews? (random) well, interesting it is simple like Kenneth the Geek said (did he mean to put Greek?) probably not
it's not professional or anything but.....anywayz I'm not too into poems so you know
I like it :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like it :)
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frozensakura Riverbank, CA
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names athena. middle names dayana, so ppl end up calling me day, dai, die-die, etc. So, feel free to call me Dayana ^_^ lawlz itz teh name i use 4 mi fbook nd vampirefreakz O.e so if u want, u can fri..
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