butterflies...

butterflies...

A Poem by frozensakura

Butterflies butterflies everywhere
close your eyes and turn three times
when you do you will see
all is there for you and me
time to play and time to dance
you just have to take a chance...

When time is done you will know
the chimes will ring and start to sing
just touch your toes and squeeze your nose
when your done repeat this verse
butterflies butterflies everywhere...

Be of haste
there's no time to waste
when you see a bell that starts to yell
this is how you know it is time to go and say goodbye
tomorrow is another day
there's time to play and time to dance
tomorrow you can take that chance
remember the chimes
remember the bell
for when you're there all is well

© 2013 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
haha don't ask... i get really bored at 3am...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

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This reminds me when I was in Elementary School. My 5th grade class raised butterflies (during that year they were my favorite animal because of this).
This reminds me of the lovely sense of innocence and freedom those butterflies gave me.
Thanks for writing this.

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Sweet, fun and endearing. Very pleasant way to spend to spend some time. I'll be reading this to my kids as well!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very cool.

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Not bad~

Posted 13 Years Ago


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oo cute, and fun, loved the rhyming made it even more fun, nice picture, simple title, loved the butterflies... u may have been bored when u wrote this but i enjoyed it, it's different, fun, and cute :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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not bad work i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


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its great i love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light and happy...nice..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is lovely and sweet, I can see it in a childs poetry book with a beautiful illustration.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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in the last line line change your to you're other than that it was beautiful chole love you! can't wait to hang out soon! haha

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