butterflies...

butterflies...

A Poem by frozensakura

Butterflies butterflies everywhere
close your eyes and turn three times
when you do you will see
all is there for you and me
time to play and time to dance
you just have to take a chance...

When time is done you will know
the chimes will ring and start to sing
just touch your toes and squeeze your nose
when your done repeat this verse
butterflies butterflies everywhere...

Be of haste
there's no time to waste
when you see a bell that starts to yell
this is how you know it is time to go and say goodbye
tomorrow is another day
there's time to play and time to dance
tomorrow you can take that chance
remember the chimes
remember the bell
for when you're there all is well

© 2013 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
haha don't ask... i get really bored at 3am...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

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This reminds me when I was in Elementary School. My 5th grade class raised butterflies (during that year they were my favorite animal because of this).
This reminds me of the lovely sense of innocence and freedom those butterflies gave me.
Thanks for writing this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Makes me think of fairies. Adorable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute poem...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww Cute poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww that's soo cute!:) I LOVE IT!:):) I love the rythme:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww... this is so cute and sweet. ^__^

This is surely could be a beautiful children's song you could sing it to them and they would be happy to listen and I hope you have a sweet voice to back it up.

Anyway, I love the cuteness and tenderness in this poem which makes a reader feel like a child again back in kindergarten years. So, awesome stuff and cheers. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me when I was in Elementary School. My 5th grade class raised butterflies (during that year they were my favorite animal because of this).
This reminds me of the lovely sense of innocence and freedom those butterflies gave me.
Thanks for writing this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write with very good flow and great imagery.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is nice! liked it a lot!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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