...

I wish I wish with all my heart
just to see you once again
I miss you very much
it's just not the same with you gone

there's a hole in our heart
and silence in the air
to leave so sudden
hurt so bad

you were my aunty
and I will never forget
the fun we had and times we shared
for all these memories will be treasured
I love you so much
and know your okay, never in pain
and I will try to stay sane
but I still feel empty inside
without you here by my side

I look around and see you everywhere
everything makes me think of you
I look through old photographs
and see you there by my side, holding my hand
and I start to cry
the pain returns, and I wanna die
I know your with me
as I get stronger everyday

uncle misses you like crazy
and cries everyday
for he can't wait to see you again

you were his first and only love
your parents thought your love was rash
you vow your vows and said "I do"
and together till the end was held forever true


We love Aunty Tammy always and forever may you rest in peace, to never be forgotten
2.12.11

Author's Note

I wrote this at 1am, cause i couldn't sleep... it fails...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I lost people who aren't close to me like my cousin but I know how hard it is to lose someone especially when they meant a lot to you... if I can go back in time I wish I will be able to spend time with my cousin so her death would really be a loss and not just something that happened one day.

[frozensakura]

i know what you mean :(

[Tess]

it's really good , i can relate ,and when someone can relate it's a good peice

[Archia]

This doesn't fail at all, I really enjoyed it. "and together till the end was held forever true" I loved that line, it was so beautiful.

[CrimsonBlaze]

No, don't say it fails D:!! This is beautifully written and I bet if your aunt is gazing right down from heaven reading this, she will feel just as happy thinking that there are people still on Earth who have never forgotten her existence. This is a truly, heartfelt poem, and I'm sorry for you're loss. It's beautiful in every way, keep it up and stay strong ;)

[Bridget Mcmaken]

its a great write very strong and deep. I think this is very good, it don't fail, it don't fail at all. You did a wonderful job. keep up the great work.

[paradise]

I like it great job all best work is made at 1 am and it doesn't fail :p

[SilentDreamer]

So sad and emotional. Nice write.

[paparapapa]

Aaaw. I loved the part about how your uncle misses your aunt. True love is so sweet. I'm sorry about your loss, but I hope she's in a happier place right now. I'm sure she's happy to have a lovely poem like this to be dedicated to her. Very sweet, indeed. :)

[tk]

aww.. it's really hard when you lose someone who is really important to you.

this is truly a heartfelt poem... :)

"there's a hole in our heart
and silence in the air
to leave so sudden
hurt so bad"

[Blake]

Sad yet very beautiful. That's hard enough to write even when it's not 1am. :p
Good job, once again :)

[Jay Bird]

It's beautiful and heart breaking.