...

I wish I wish with all my heart
just to see you once again
I miss you very much
it's just not the same with you gone

there's a hole in our heart
and silence in the air
to leave so sudden
hurt so bad

you were my aunty
and I will never forget
the fun we had and times we shared
for all these memories will be treasured
I love you so much
and know your okay, never in pain
and I will try to stay sane
but I still feel empty inside
without you here by my side

I look around and see you everywhere
everything makes me think of you
I look through old photographs
and see you there by my side, holding my hand
and I start to cry
the pain returns, and I wanna die
I know your with me
as I get stronger everyday

uncle misses you like crazy
and cries everyday
for he can't wait to see you again

you were his first and only love
your parents thought your love was rash
you vow your vows and said "I do"
and together till the end was held forever true


We love Aunty Tammy always and forever may you rest in peace, to never be forgotten
2.12.11

Author's Note

I wrote this at 1am, cause i couldn't sleep... it fails...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I lost people who aren't close to me like my cousin but I know how hard it is to lose someone especially when they meant a lot to you... if I can go back in time I wish I will be able to spend time with my cousin so her death would really be a loss and not just something that happened one day.

[frozensakura]

i know what you mean :(

[Kiari Sabon]

i like it........... it makes me think of my aunt she jus found out she has cancer in both lungs

[Cassiopia Summers]

Beautiful. It always helps to let go of the sad, hurt, and depression of losing somebody when you write a poem to them even though they're gone. I understand this because I have written a few to my Daddy. It helps when I get into my manic depression days and just dont feel alright or like myself at all. It helps, it truly does. And your work here is simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Ashli The Amazing]

beautiful simply beautiful [: i absolutely love it! it has such good structure. i can tell you really miss your Aunt talk to me anytime you need to or want to.....oh wait you already do haha awesome!

[Rene Velez]

an ode to a special family member, endearing to say the least...

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is beautiful. although there were a few typo's, such as vowels should vows and instead of "your parents thought your love was to rash" you could have said your parents thought your love was to rushed. Just trying to help the flow. other than that this is a great poem and I am sure your aunt was smiling on you while you were writing it.

[light and ashes]

This is not a fail. It is wonderful and sencere. This reminds me of something I saw "If tears could build a stairway, and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to Heaven and bring you back home again." I am sorry for your loss.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was really sad. I know how you feel...I lost my uncle, my cousin in law, grandpa, and a couple of other people...It's so hard without them here...this was very emotional, but good write. Thanks for sharing.

[Short.Nerd]

it's always hard losing a loved one :( Excellent way to share how your feeling and a nice poem!