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A Poem by frozensakura

I wish I wish with all my heart
just to see you once again
I miss you very much
it's just not the same with you gone

there's a hole in our heart
and silence in the air
to leave so sudden
hurt so bad

you were my aunty
and I will never forget
the fun we had and times we shared
for all these memories will be treasured
I love you so much
and know your okay, never in pain
and I will try to stay sane
but I still feel empty inside
without you here by my side

I look around and see you everywhere
everything makes me think of you
I look through old photographs
and see you there by my side, holding my hand
and I start to cry
the pain returns, and I wanna die
I know your with me
as I get stronger everyday

uncle misses you like crazy
and cries everyday
for he can't wait to see you again

you were his first and only love
your parents thought your love was rash
you vow your vows and said "I do"
and together till the end was held forever true


We love Aunty Tammy always and forever may you rest in peace, to never be forgotten
2.12.11

© 2013 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
I wrote this at 1am, cause i couldn't sleep... it fails...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

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I lost people who aren't close to me like my cousin but I know how hard it is to lose someone especially when they meant a lot to you... if I can go back in time I wish I will be able to spend time with my cousin so her death would really be a loss and not just something that happened one day.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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frozensakura

12 Years Ago

i know what you mean :(



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I know all to well the pain of loss and this resonates deeply...beautifully written! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very honest and well done. I lost someone I loved also. Made a poem for him also. I understand you completely.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful write,
very sad and heartfelt piece...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I may be 99% asleep, but I liked this and it was good. And if it held my attention when I was this tired, that is sayin something. not a fail.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No, not a fail. Very nice, and heartfelt. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

double sad, you stick with.. 'never to be forgotten'
Regards.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It dosen't fail, it's beautiful. I love it, and you did an amazing job with the imagery, I felt every word, and it was beautiful. I'm very sorry for your loss :/

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad and beautiful. Wonderful, I really liked it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awhh, so beautiful. :D And so sad i feel for you. but this is a sad but moving piece love it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love the work and im sorry

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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