runaway

door locked behind
walk quietly in
take a left then a right

 

that lingering smell
we wish to forget
yet so hard to when
empty bottels just lay
scattered across the floor

 

unoticed so far, your safe
dont get caught
for you know whats next

 

just great...

you didnt see it

and kicked a bottel

you made noise

 

screwed up
once again
another mistake
start agian

 

grab hold of it
time to go
let the blood flow
let everything go

Author's Note

meepz

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this too. It was good.

[Suzy Q]

I like this ^_^ It's good.

[Roze Collions]

i like it

[Yina]

This was interesting!:) I wasn't expecting the ending. Totally thought you'd make it or something:) Nice write, Dayana:)

[joshua deathdealer]

This is a great write Athena. Keep it up.

[Ashli The Amazing]

really nice [:

[compositionc]

Fantastically done

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is beautiful

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this....