still doll

the doors open and the light turn on
in come people from near and far
we watch as they look as us in admiring daze
while all we can do is wait

 

one comes up to me and smiles
while another takes away those precious from me
my anger and sadness cannot be shown
for it is unacceptable

 

we never chose to be here
we do not wish to stay
but either way, we have no choice
we play this part in fate

 

i watch as they are taken away
one by one
a silent goodbye is all i can say

for i am but another still doll

Author's Note

just cant stand seeing those dolls... they remind me to much of me...

Reviews

[Kiari Sabon]

i love it

[FugitiveBalloons]

I like this, its a sad story. It also sets a little mystery for the reader because you really don't know where they are being taken only that it doesn't seem like a safe place.

[Maya Storm]

Well this is different :/ I like

[Cassiopia Summers]

Very interesting piece... I sorta just fell in love with your writing. Lol. It's gonna be great reading your pieces and seeing your ideas. Great poem. Thanks for the insight into your thoughts.

[Rene Velez]

interesting poem...

[Ciarraí Danielle..]

Beautiful! I love it. I can imagine why they'd remind you of yourself.

[November Gold]

this sounds tormented and sad, you expressed those well and led me into the feelings with you. Nice

[StarSandwich]

O_o this is interesting. Sometimes I kinda feel like that :/ But there just small moments. The flows great I like this poem alot