who i am

you can say im different

i dont mind

i dont care

its true

 

im not like everyone else

i dont want to be like them

not in any way

quit comparing them to me

 

i dont want to be someone im not

i cant be that person everyone wants me to be

i just want to be me 

 

im the type of girl thats quite

whos rarely outgoing

i dont speak my mind

even when im dying inside to do so

 

im the one standing in the dark corner by myself

if somethings bothering me, i wont say what

even if its tearing me apart on the inside

 

i know that when the tears fall,

the one who wipped them away befor,wont

when i sing aloud, im not heard

thats okay though, im not good at it anyway

 

in truth, i care more about everyone else more than myself

if somethings bothering you, ill deal with it

if your in trouble, ill help you win the fisht

you gotta know in always here for you

evenwhen im not

 

im the type of girl who speaks in a formal manner

who dose whats shes told

who dosent talk back

i only do so because i choose to

 

if you dont like me, thats fine

if you have to say something to me, tell it to my face

i wont take you seriously otherwise

 

when im at my weakest, thats when you strike

when im at my weakest, you think you have a chance

overpower me? maybe with strength, but nothing more

you think you can win

dear, your too confedent

 

but guess what?

i would rather die than let you win

hun, if things were that easy, i woulndt be here

Author's Note

thiz haz been botherin me all day :/
blah thiz haz no flow 2 it >.<
EPIC FAIL lawlz
-athena

Reviews

[ImagineItAll]

I really like this for two reasons: 1) It's coming from YOU and it's not a story that you fabricated, 2) You were brave enough to post it.

This poem is a very powerful statement. I believe a lot of people can relate to what you say at some point or another. This is NOT an "epic fail" because it's an honest, raw, passionate and powerful poem.

[brenda]

lol i like it it describes what happens peole always attack you at your weakest nice write i liked it !

[compositionc]

Awww...that was sad. I think anyone could relate, being an odd one out.Very emotional too.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Top piece, emotiannly top rate poem:)

Yas

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a really nice write. I liked the emotions within the piece. The words you have written were truthful. I loved the honesty within the piece as well. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

REAL GOOD