Love In The Aftermath

its simple to see

that this 'love' you have for me

is nothing but a lie

 

this 'love' you have is forced

its tormenting me everyday

yet i try to avoid

to shed tears over useless things

 

just tell me the truth

im tired of all the lies

that you tell me

and yourself

 

Author's Note

muchos thanks to Amanda for help with teh title :) -Athena

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Sweet, deep write:)

[Ashli The Amazing]

nice [:

[joshua deathdealer]

Excellent write as well as title. Good collaboration.

[Eile MacIntyre]

The title compliments the poem. :)

[silentpoet]

Aftermath of a love that you thought was real.. I really enjoyed this one because I recently felt It myself..very good work, It's deep and filled with real emotion..

[Emunah June.]

What a way to express something so raw. I love it

[Roze Collions]

love it

[kasanova]

relatable.

[Samantha Heaton]

Short but demanding... Great job!!

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this (:
It's so deep, and sad, but beautiful. And idk if you are looking for title suggestions, but "Love In The Aftermath" could be cool (: