my smile

i remember the feelings you gave me,

and when i think of you, my soul flies free.

Even while my heart aches deeply,

memoeries of you let me treat others sweetly.

 

please stop me from crying,

help me win this fight.

whispers of the wind, the water,

the cherry blossoms of the night...

help my smile awaken with a joy unserpassed,

even if such gental things,

were never ment to last

 

Author's Note

not normally like me, but whatever :P -Athena

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

Awwww. It is so beautiful and soooo romantic. When I read it, I felt like I wanted to cry (in a happy way)(the way you cry at weddings) Lol. "Whispers of the wind, the water, the cherry blossoms of the night..." I just adored this line. And the imagery was just beyond imagination. :)

[samurai212]

This is really good hun :)

[Kyla H]

This is outstanding, and easily relateable. Well done.

[knixsilva]

This reached me on a strong level. I think your work is excellent.

[Ashli The Amazing]

wow this is really deep....i can really relate to this somehow.