my smile

i remember the feelings you gave me,

and when i think of you, my soul flies free.

Even while my heart aches deeply,

memoeries of you let me treat others sweetly.

 

please stop me from crying,

help me win this fight.

whispers of the wind, the water,

the cherry blossoms of the night...

help my smile awaken with a joy unserpassed,

even if such gental things,

were never ment to last

 

Author's Note

not normally like me, but whatever :P -Athena

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

Awwww. It is so beautiful and soooo romantic. When I read it, I felt like I wanted to cry (in a happy way)(the way you cry at weddings) Lol. "Whispers of the wind, the water, the cherry blossoms of the night..." I just adored this line. And the imagery was just beyond imagination. :)

[Daytonight]

Such beautiful imagery. I really like this one a lot. Keep on penning.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was so cute and romantic. This is just so adorable. It got me too smile. :)
I love the imagery too it's so vivid. Good job. Thanks for sharing. :)

[brenda]

a hopeful poem and sweet that i can realate to so much loved it !!:)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Makes so much sense this poem:)

[Roze Collions]

love it

[Eile MacIntyre]

This was fantastic! Cherry blossoms of the night... great.

[boston house kitten]

very touching. you can tell its personal - and although its just a glimpse into our complex emotions - its says all it needs to say.

[Suzy Q]

I know how you feel. I love this! So much.

[CharlesMonroe]

Awh (:
So sweet, so gentle, I loooove this. Love it (:

[Yina]

When I think of you, my soul flies free...... Absolutely beautiful!:) I love this! Beautiful write, Chole:)