Not a poem

 I should have just said what was on my mind

Should have said 
I'm a mess

 and 

I'm breaking down
I need a hug 

and 

stop asking what's wrong 
Shut up 

and

let me cry

let me cry until I can't cry anymore

But of course I didn't

Reviews

[scottysohaughty]

emo..gave up on breakups until people evolve...could take awhile........so i just love myself....im a selfish lil buddhist

[a]

Why is this called "Not a poem"? I'm curious. I like your enjambment in the poem, the way it makes the words seem broken - just like the emotions you're conveying. Nice work.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Many people feel or felt this way. you wrote this very well. I wish you the best for your troubles to go away.

[Clare the Artist]

Words you wish that you can take back but it's too late or the feelings of loneliness is what I got. At some parts it sounded awkward and incomplete, but I liked the simplicity and what the poem implies.

[Angela]

Ah, you can never take back what you never said. I love that theme. The poem is really emotional and easily to relate to. There are some lines that don't exactly flow, per se, but in a whole this poem is gold. (^A^)

[Ariana H]

I can definitely relate to this poem and I'm sure a lot of other people can too. Love it!

[25syd25]

I really liked it

[Tess]

Very deep, I love it.

[Brianna Brie]

Oh, how many times I could have said just that. It is so very heartfelt.

[Calibaster]

Really good poem. I like the rhythm!