liars and thieves

liars and thieves

A Poem by loserface mcgee

liars and thieves -

that's what you all are.

you said you loved me and ditched me for him

you said we were best friends and pitched a fit

you said you wouldn't hurt me ever but you did

you're all goddamn thieves

robbing me of my innocence

optimism

every day

did you think that you could leave me for dead?

you're liars.

you're thieves.

and i hope you burn in hell.

© 2009 loserface mcgee


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Hmm, interesting piece. The last line truly mirrors a sentiment I hold towards a select few in my life. Raw emotion, whether real or conjured up, is evident in this. Bravo, it is a good piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very good. but i cant help feeling its about me.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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