Eclipse

Sing with me if your heart knows great pain. Sing with me the song of Eclipse.

I want you to stab a dagger through my hollow heart.

To watch me bleed to death, slowly, ever so painfully.

 

I want you to call me anything but my true name.

To berate me with hideous, cruel jokes of blasphemy.

 

I want you to murder me by enough ways to fill a graveyard.

To mutate my fallen body, savagely, with obsessive accuracy.

 

I want you to pin me on to the wall of shame.

To empty all the anger, burning, full of misery.

I want my last breath to dance away from my lips.

To sing forth the song of the Eclipse.

 

I want my last note of life to spring from your eyes.

To show my love for you was naught but darkening skies.

Author's Note

Feel free to review. As always, thanks for reading.

Reviews

[Kruppz]

Dark, as usual. I could personally relate to the emotion. I know how it feels like being taken for granted. And it feels exactly like the way you've put it. Great work.

[sparklingfacet]

Nice write! I could really relate to the emotion it's like I don't care if you hurt me as long as you see me! Well done!

[Maan]

What if the death is just another start of the pain? and that would be more horrifying than one can give pain here in this tragic world.

Your words were accurate, too accurate to compel a person to your point.
:p thank God that I'm not the person you're asking. :p

apart from jokes, it was a lovely read, loved it. :)

[Acropolix]

Death in this poem doesn't mean the end. I used death to resemble pain humans can feel when they love those that merely abuse that emotion for selfish reasons. To force these persons to consider what damage they cause, to show they darken the light like an eclipse. To show it's not too late for them to bring back the light, like the eclipse. And once they murdered their lovers, watch the dying love, their hearts will forever mourn for the love too blind to be seen in the darkness.

[Crystal K]

I enjoyed reading this. And it seems so close to me.