Delusive Sanity

A note of one lonely dreamer.

I am king

Crowned for greatness

 

I am divine

Prayed to for immortality

 

I am infinite

Unchained by boundaires

 

I am human

Limited to my fantasy

 

I am Acropolix

Carved in your mind.

Author's Note

As always, thanks for reading.

Reviews

[crystallized illusions]

As another review stated, I enjoy how raw this was written. Very to the point. I enjoyed reading this and anticipated seeing where you were going to take it; your ending did not disappoint.

Carved into my mind?
A dreamer's presumption, but perhaps so.

[Acropolix]

Thank you and keep dreaming :)

[Marri]

'I am a human, limited to my fantasy' should be carved on a wall

[Acropolix]

A good idea, perhaps another item for on my bucket list ^^

[Craba]

very cool, much njoyable

[Kruppz]

I really love this style of yours. You can keep it short and at the same time, you seem to be able to convey what you've set out to- nothing more, nothing less. If you'd allow me to comment, what this style conveys about you is perfectionism.

I find the last two stanzas profound & thought-provoking. They go parallel yet seem to converge at a common point.

Thanks for a wonderful read, as usual. I wouldn't rate you.

[Kruppz]

BTW, I'm a lonely dreamer too.

[Acropolix]

Your words are honour me, Kruppz. You are right to say I use very few words to bring my message across, but that might be a flaw as well as I am unable to elaborate on one particular subject for a great length of time. As to perfectionism, I understand your reasoning and I thank you for the compliment, but you could also call it minimalistic :)

Keep dreaming.

[JiDonnelly]

I like how raw and short this is, makes it more powerful.
nice work.

-JiDonnelly'

[Lina Grey]

Lonely dreamer, not dreaming alone...you are everything you make yourself to be dear :)

[TLK]

"Carved in your mind" is a little bit presumptuous. ;)

[Acropolix]

It's only a dreamer's note after all.