A bedtime story

A bedtime story

A Story by Acropolix
"

But not what you would expect.

"

"Mummy, where did father go?"

 

"You know father went to heaven, with God and his angels."

 

"But why did Jesus not die? He came back to life. I want daddy to come back too."

 

"Because Jesus is the Son of God."

"But you also said we all are children of God."

 

"Come now, Féawyn, I have told you many times by now."

 

"I just want to understand where daddy has gone to, mummy."

 

"We all miss him, sweetheart, we all do."

 

(...)

 

"Mummy, why did father have to die so young if he lived such a good and honest life?"

 

"Féawyn! Please leave the matter be. We can't change what has happened, now try to take some sleep."

 

"I dream about him, every night I see him fly with me through the sky. But then he fades away together with the clouds and then I fall, only to wake up just before I hit the ground."

 

"Dreams are not real, honey, they won't hurt you. Just think of something happy and you will rest better."

 

"I don't want to think about something happy! I don't want to forget daddy's face!"

 

"Of course you 'don't. Let me sleep with you tonight and protect you in your dreams, OK?"

 

"OK, mummy. Will you sing daddy's song one more time?"

 

"Please, Féawyn, you know its hard for me to do that."

 

"I will sing with you."

 

"Very well."

© 2013 Acropolix


Author's Note

Acropolix
Feel free to leave a comment. As always, thanks for reading.

My Review

Would you like to review this Story?
Login | Register




Reviews

Wow, I have never read anything quite like it in my life..
Its amazing I don't know what it is I think I'm too poorly educated..

-JiDonnelly'

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well done, the child seems to cut to the core of the issue of death through simple, questioning innocence. It is used quite effectively... and a cool choice of a name for the child, if I might add.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Acropolix

12 Years Ago

I thought the name to be somewhat 'elvish'. At least, the lore of elves inspired me to come up with .. read more
The innocence of the child, her inability to understand the treasure lost, perfectly described, as is the anguish felt by the mother, which she is ready to overcome for her child! Brilliant! :')

Posted 12 Years Ago


Acropolix

12 Years Ago

My gratitude for your kind words.

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

130 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on October 9, 2012
Last Updated on January 30, 2013

Author

Acropolix
Acropolix

Netherlands



About
My writing says who I am, who I want to be, and who I will never be. more..

Writing
The Siege The Siege

A Poem by Acropolix