Eye for an EyeA Story by AcropolixVery short story on the meaning of true love.A great many years ago there lived a girl no different from those today in but one thing; blindness. She was born in an ocean of darkness which she could never swim out of. Fortunately, a faint glow of light had entered her world and was named Hope. If she felt lonely and lost to the world there was the comforting hand on her shoulder. The calm voice that vibrated through her very soul. It was Hope the girl clung to with all her strength and will, making it her every reason to survive. A god of her own religion.
And she prayed, prayed to her god for the impossible to be possible. For however much her heart was filled with gratitude for this loyalty, there was still the vast emptiness surrounding her like invisible bars of a cage, casting her into the shadow which was named Despair. When tears would flow like summer rains and hate would fill her for being blind, those were the moments that lasted eons. Eons of Despair. It was the devil poisoning her heart with grief and misery, making it her every purpose to keep fighting. The satan of her own religion.
Growing weaker each day, losing the strength to keep fighting and believing, intensifying the desire of seeing the shoulder that held her close, to watch the man who spoke those soothing words and reach out to his face watching those eyes mirroring her own affectionate expression. To swim out of the darkness and grasp the sky with her fist. It was the desire that made her understand it was all for naught, a disillusion mesmerizing her dreams.
"My love, my stars, I want to know who is the bringer of light. For to be left ignorant is to be left with no further cause to live." The deep voice that answered her, the voice of this god, always made her feel ashamed of what she just had said. "My sun and moon, if life is losing its grip on you, no words or image can express what I feel. Would you truly do anything to step out of the shadow?"
Finally, the faint glow of light grew brighter and started to breach through the cage and lift her up out of the ocean. The curtains of a long dramatic play opened and she stepped forward. Her eyelids moved up and there were colours everywhere. But the focus was on the man before her, so average to any stranger, though for her it was so much more. She sensed there was something wrong. She didn't see those chocolate brown eyes he had spoken of, instead they were grey and stared unnaturally into the vast distance. There was no Hope in those eyes, not even a faint hint at all. Despair stalked the mist that ran across the iris. He just simply stood there, like a dead soul trapped in a living being. © 2012 AcropolixAuthor's Note
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4 Reviews Added on October 3, 2012 Last Updated on October 8, 2012 AuthorAcropolixNetherlandsAboutMy writing says who I am, who I want to be, and who I will never be. more..Writing
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