Falling star

What a falling star can inspire you to write about...

When gods are mortal in the least

And the sun rises west and sets to the east

When rivers climb in to the sky

And truths are told through the lie

When snow freezes in desert sand

And fish will run over this land

When this day should come to be

And I am still watching thee

 

Then my love for you may end

And all stars are to descend.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kruppz]

This is the best compared to the rest you've shared with us. This poem is a little too poetic! And equally romantic. You seem to always go for the path less taken. Even when it comes to expressing love, you have your unique style. I loved the imagery used, the flow of the poem,... Thanks.

[Acropolix]

Thank you for your kind words :), glad you enjoyed it!

[Craba]

very nicely written, like this

[rnuff]

Wow, i really enjoyed this write, poetic and deep.

[mayowa]

You are really determined to love till the end. Nice work.

[Odrah]

Fantastic. I love all of the imagery in this poem and intense insistence of love everlasting.