Satan's Roar
A Poem by
Acropolix
I am the dagger that
cuts through your soul
I am the blizzard
to which angels fall
I am the whisper,
the nightfall's voice
I am the playful,
humans are my toys.
© 2012 Acropolix
Author's Note
In dedication to the Tempter.
Reviews
Your poem inspired me these lines-
I shall tread a path of ruthless thorns if it leads to my destiny;
No spell, no cupid's arrow, no tempter's trick can work on me.
Thanks for writing & inspiring.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
I like these lines very much! I am glad to hear these lines were inspired by this poem. Thank you.
It's interesting.
I like the third stanza the most, out of all of them.
Keep writing!
Posted 12 Years Ago
It's interesting.
I like the third stanza the most, out of all of them.
Keep writing!
this is true... Satan always find his way to our weak hearts but with faith we can defeat him (:
Posted 12 Years Ago
this is true... Satan always find his way to our weak hearts but with faith we can defeat him (:
I love the different examples of the Tempter's tricks, and how it is short and to the point about who the Tempter is and what he does. He truely does treat humans like his toys. This is great. Thank you.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I love the different examples of the Tempter's tricks, and how it is short and to the point about who the Tempter is and what he does. He truely does treat humans like his toys. This is great. Thank you.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Your review is much appreciated! I always liked to make a poem about the less common subjects.
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Added on July 27, 2012
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