Remember Me

very short but very powerful (kind of)

All in all, I have no regrets. 

The sun still shines, the sun still sets. 

The heart forgives, the heart forgets. 

One more kiss, even though it's come to this. 

I'll close my eyes and make a wish... 

Hoping you'll remember.

Reviews

[Laura Storm]

Good ending, the whole piece is simple yet elegent.

[WhiteWillow]

Great piece, wrapped up nicely with a black bow.

[Hotwater]

A real little treat, most readable. Top draw.
*bird*

[Lemontine]

Wow! I love the flow of this poem, and the imagery. It's a great poem.

[Night]

I adore it.

[Forgotten Soldier]

Wow. Dark and good! Love it!

[rt farris]

a sentiment captured. a life moment that happens. well put.

[Sweet Emotions]

Even though this is really short, it portrays a ton of emotion. It's like it captures just one moment of a night or something.