When You are In Love With That Girl

Sorry I deleted this, I thought I would need it for school, I was wrong. But I still hope that y'all enjoy it.

When you are in love with that girl

When you’re in love with that girl,

She doesn’t have to be in love with you.

When you’re in love with that girl,

everything else seems so petty.

She is more than an intrusive thought,

she intrudes upon every thought.

It becomes difficult to function properly.

When that girl fills your heart of hearts with love,

with caring,

with joy,

with the feelings of a million and a half sunny days,

You will forget about damn near all of your worries.

It is interesting how when you’re in love with that girl,

your eyes light up at the mere mention of her name,

the way your lips curl as you smile when she is brought up

in a casual conversation, the way your voice changes when

you talk about her.

You may not know this feeling,

but I sure as hell do.

I deeply wish that she knew,

and that she felt the that way too.

Author's Note

For those of you whom have already reviewed and enjoyed it, I'm sorry that I took it down, I thought that I'd have needed it for school.

Reviews

[Katyaini(Kaycee/Kay)]

Something in this poem reflects trueness and innocence of this heavenly feeling.... great job!!! keep writing. :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Lovely poem. I also liked the form of this writing. Great job!