Wish

Wish

A Poem by Im a reel vamp lover

I wish he was mine

I wish he knew I was alive

I wish I was her in his arms,

but I'm not I'm just me

So, I will just keep wishing for something that will never be

 

 

 

 

 

© 2010 Im a reel vamp lover


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So romantic and I totally feel you! I used to feel just like this and it hurt so badly.
Nice poem! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago
ima guy and i liked this..thats wierd

Posted 12 Years Ago
amazing. short but very good.
XD

Posted 12 Years Ago
I loved it all!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago
very Nice poem :) 78/100 :3

Posted 12 Years Ago
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awww it absolutely wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago
The poem is very good. No weaknesses. Just strong and positive words. I like the description of a love that can't be. A excellent poem.
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Posted 13 Years Ago
You got the feeling down great. Your form in this one is better and it's not so rough. All in all a good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on December 3, 2010
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