My Inner Enemy

I have become a monster and i dont know how to stop Purple= Akira Blue= ashley ashley is my sad side. the girl that comes out when i do things to hurt myself.. hopefully you get it.

Just do it

You know you want to

Nobody can help you escape

You know its blood i've come to take

You want to be happy

That's what I see

That is why you call on me

 

No this isnt how i want to stay sane

Because I know I have a complex brain

I want to be happy

Yes this is true

But I cant do it with you

Blood is red the color of pain

Why did I start playing this game

 

Now dont start acting like you dont know

You know you feel like you have to go

To a place so very dark for hurting others

Because it's your repretation you had to smother

You left him now he sees her in his mind

That's mean that you know it's time

For you to do the thing you do to make yourself feel great

So what if it's filled with pain and hate

It makes you feel the pain you caused

And reminds you of all your flaws

So do it, just do it and you will see

That I'm your friend, not your worst enemy

 

Yes you are get out of my head

You're the one who makes me feel dead

You're the one who makes all the pain come to reality

And make me look at things unclearly

So what if he loves her, im ok

He never wanted me anyway

So all you shown me is what i already knew

Your are my worst enemy and this its true....

 

 

 

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[Aven]

"Just do it. You know you want to. Nobody can help you escape. You know its blood i've come to take. You want to be happy. That's what I see. That is why you call on me."

That is just beautifully written. Happiness, despair, sanity, insanity. So many contrasts, so much emotion. Lovely. :)

[Poeticpiers]

regular rhyme scheme interesting subject material all thats lacking is meter.
Poetry needs meter but not neccessarily rhyme.Meter makes your words flow when read aloud. ivor