Haiku I

Haiku I

A Poem by ale
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based on Estampes: 1. Pagodes. Modérément animé by Claude Debussy.

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Under the willow
I dream of what could be
As the warm air blows

© 2023 ale


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Your haiku has a very beautiful sentiment to it, sensually arousing in the way it invokes a warm, fuzzing feeling inside those who read it and the imagination of those who desire a better day. A nice work, author ale, thank you for sharing your work.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ale

11 Months Ago

thanks so much!
Stu. T.H.

11 Months Ago

You certainly are most welcome, author ale. It's merely the praise you've rightfully earned with you.. read more

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