The Human Cycle

death.

life.

death.

life.

death.

Watch TV.

death.

life.

death.

life.

death. 

Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

There is more than what this poem conveys, the technology of our time is death in itself. We just kill time.

Great write
I got to learn a lot from you!

[Sasha]

LOL. I like the way you just threw watch tv in there. And I wasn't aware people died so many times. That's interesting.

[Manda]

hmm... this was diffidently unique, for i have never read anything like this before. i guess we come and go all together. i like this short and to the point! well done!

[~*_Michelle_*~]

Hellu, fellow filipino:) This was very blunt. And I liked it :D

[Mark]

this is very wry. I like it.

[shayne]

Ahh, yes. Sounds a lot like how I live my life. Well done.

And oh, Filipino? Welcome aboard :)

[rachielle]

I liked the way you put something as shallow as watching TV in the middle of two as significant things as life and death. This gives the impression of routine, and the way we "die" in our everyday lives. Very original.