Hollow

Holed in my room for days, I needed an outlet. 2015

Hollow

Vile parasites in my mind,

Why can't all words just be kind?

Dying flowers and bruising lies..

Tainted hearts and drowning cries.

How can you sit for hours, 

Yet feel no time? 

Smile for others,

But inside you cry.

Haunted soul, sallow eyes..

Dead dreams and nothing nice.

Nothing, nothing, nothing.

Author's Note

This was a dark time for me! I always find getting it out helps, any tips with punctuation and grammar etc, let me know how to improve future works :)

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very heartfelt piece full of painful pathos.

[Gee]

Tis a dark piece. Looking at the date I'm hoping you are in a better place mentally now.
Dark but we'll written B

[boobalajcushion]

Ah, I am in a MUCH better place now. Thank you for your comment! Appreciate it :)

[Gee]

My pleasure......strange name:)