Revenge

Actually quite old. I wrote it some years ago. It's a bit young, but oh well

Revenge,
Revenge,
Such sweet sorrow.
I shall take part in it on the morrow.
Revenge,
Revenge,
The bell that calls us on...
The sweet far thing...
Far from us it goes away,
And comes back in he oddest of ways.
It comes back as things that go bump in night.
It comes back as things that give us all fright.
Come take part,
I'll never tell.
Come take my hand and I'll lead you to hell.

Reviews

[Allison]

Thanks y'all

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

I think that titling this piece as "revenge" was misleading, but also appropriate.
The reader has to think to understand this piece, and it's quite refreshing :)

[Dove]

It may be a bit young but I like it

[Clay :D]

its still a good poem allison(: