BEST DAY OF MY LIFE!!!!!!!

BEST DAY OF MY LIFE!!!!!!!

A Poem by Allison
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I'm dating Tristin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I thought maybe it would work.
You said we could give it a try.
Is this really what I want,
or is it all a lie?
I'm dating the guy of my dreams,
The one human being on Earth that I would die for,
And I'm afraid,
Afraid of pain.
Will things work out?
Is this all my fairy tale ending,
Or is this just the beginning?

© 2010 Allison


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Allison
Let me kno wat u think!!!!!

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Very good poem!!!!! I really like the picture also

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It is just the beginning. Relationships are hard work. Can't allow the people of doubt to interrupt your happiness. A positive and beautiful poem of love. I tell my children life is slow and easy. The special moments in a life are rare and we need not waste them. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

you should go to photobucket and get a love picture (:
anyhoo, this is cute. and makes me smile inside. (: yay.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Allison

Dinosaurland, HI



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Howdy.... Obviously I'm Allison...... I write a lot of poetry, annnnnd I've heard that I'm pretty sarcastic and awesome :-) Review my stuffs pease? :D more..

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