I Love You Too.

I Love You Too.

A Poem by Allison
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I told Tristin that I love him today, and he said I love you too!!!!!

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I finally said them.
The three words I wanted to say.
Today,
I said them.
I
Love
You.
I said them,
My skin burned hot in anticipation.
I was scared.
I didn't know if you would say them too.
You said them.
Four words I'll never forget.
Four words I didn't expect.
I
Love
You
Too.
I can't believe it.
Hearing those words from your mouth,
Makes them unreal.
Makes me feel like I'm floating on air.
I feel like the world has opened up to me.
I feel like nothing could go wrong.
Now,
All I want to do is sing a song.

© 2010 Allison


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How fresh, healthy and rejoicing! Blessed are those who can still feel the gigantic emotions inspired by these words!



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great nice poem :) Really loved it :) keep it up :) this way

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww this is so cute and sweet:) well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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That's really cool that this is about a true story! It makes me like this poem even more! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is indescribably sweet. The repetition works well in the piece, though the format is a bit distracting for me. Overall, I really enjoyed it though. Great job. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Allison
Allison

Dinosaurland, HI



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Howdy.... Obviously I'm Allison...... I write a lot of poetry, annnnnd I've heard that I'm pretty sarcastic and awesome :-) Review my stuffs pease? :D more..

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