Hello?

For Tristin, AGAIN. I'm sick of pouring my heart out to him and he acts like he could care less.

I've been waiting by the phone for hours.

Waiting for your call.

I know that you don't love me the same way I love you,

But would it hurt to try?

I always thought you were someone lovable,

Someone who would care.

But would it be so bad if you just replied to my texts?

The only thing you say now,

Is lol or wow, and kool.

No more heartfelt conversations.

No more  talking about our lives.

No more of me thinking how yours intertwined with mine.

I guess we weren't meant to be.

Because from my guesswork,

You just don't seem to care about me. 

Reviews

[blood red skies]

Seems as though this is really going on in the writers life.
This poem is something that alot of people could relate too.
hopefully , your not going through this... and if you are,
you can work passed it and find some happiness.
furthermore, nice write. i did enjoy reading.

[Daydreamer54]

Wow sad, there is someone for you though and that person won;t treat u like that. Such sadness here. it;'s good when you can let all ur feelings out on a page! keep up the good work!

[A.Lee]

I hope you don't sit around waiting for him. From the sound of it someone as talented as you could find someone much better. Very nicely written poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love can twist us up. Nothing as bad as waiting for someone or a answer. Poem is filled with confusion and hope for reason or purpose to hold on. Many strong lines made the poem a very good read. A excellent poem.
Coyote