Who Woulda Thought?

About the same guy i wrote my luv poem 4. He led me on then said we shouldnt date, after he called me baby, and hot, and beautiful. what's wrong with me?

Who Woulda Thought that you'd say these things?

You called me beautiful, baby, you said that I'm amazing.

But you still broke my heart.

Who Woulda Thought, It'd be you?

The one person in the world,

That I love,

That I trust,

That I would Do anything for.

I devoted my entire life to you,

And you tore my heart out.

You betrayed me,

Made me feel worthless.

Who Woulda Thought, that you'd be the one to make me feel that,

Something I have never felt before.

Do you care?

Or is it another game of yours,

Designed to lead me on?

You called me beautiful, hot, baby, you said that I'm amazing.

But I guess your not worth all the time I put into you,

All my efforts have been denied.

I guess I'm nothing in your eyes.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is hard when we realize we were use and abuse and treated poorly. Better to walk away and show no sadness till in private. Poem told a powerful and sad story. In the end even the biggest fool will see the user and walk away. I like the ending. It is hard to understand the truth when we care for someone. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[zombiikillah666]

yes. i relate.
but then i was like,
im going to start writing about
drinking and drug use.
it made me happy. (:
i like this. (: whooti whoop :D