Do you see me?

Getting into the Halloween spirit!

 You feel the darkness,

and taste the black,

hear the shadows whisper back,

and yet you still don't see what lies beyond reality.

You may think your world is the only one,

but you are mistaken.

The worlds beyond this one are great you see,

but are only seen in wishes and dreams.

the world you live in whispers to you,

false security.

In your dreams and nightmares too,

is a world that only magic can construe.

I shall lead you on as the bells ring.

They call us on in spite of everything.

So feel the darkness,

and taste the black,

hear the shadows whisper back.

 

 

 

Author's Note

got the last and first phrase from a friend, she made an even better poem with the same phrase. :)

Reviews

[Demetria.Ro$e.Hathaway]

Grate poem

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the meaning in your poem. In the end we are not as important as we believe. The words flowed very good. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[ebur™]

excellent! not much more to say... just keep it up and great job! :)

[ace]

excellent job the only comment i can offer is to add a picture to it so it draws in more people to read it good work

[Holly]

I loved this, you can picture it in your head, almost. You did an awesome job, and you should keep it up! :]

[Sophia]

I love this! You're getting so good at writing. I'm so pround of you!

Ps: would you mind very much if I used this for a story I'm writing? *hopeful eyes*

[M. Amphet Salt]

I like this. It's really cool and to read out loud.