Drown

A friend asked me to write this for her.

 I'm feeling so helpless,

Can anyone save me?

I'm feeling so broken,

Can you save me?

My heart sends a plea,

to anyone standing near.

They've broken me,

They've broken me.......

I'm feeling so let down,

I can't breathe,

I'm drowning in the darkness.

I'm feeling so hopeless,

afraid to let go, 

I don't wanna drown.

If I let go, will hell consume me?

I'm afraid to let go,

afraid to loose control.....

Just don't let me drown.....

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Don't want to end it all yet. You have a long life ahead of you. A lot of good and bad times. Just got to shake the bad stuff off and move on to another day. Soon you will be working and living your own life. Wishing to be a kid again. A strong poem.
Coyote

[Sophia]

Another beautiful poem. Hang in there, things'll get better.

[KimmiChristine(:]

Wow very well written. Beautiful. I know what you mean. Sometimes inside im just screaming for help, but outside im laughing and being an outgoing girl.Its all an act and I totally feel that in this poem :) great job

[Rylan Batten]

Deep and well-written. I liked it. Keep it up

[caliban]

good poem; hang in there--things will get better.