Care

Care

A Poem by Allison
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Does anyone care?

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 Does Anyone Care?

I speak of the horror of not having anyone who cares.

Imagine having friends who loved and cared about you.

Until you learn that they don't care about you.

Not your well being, not yourself,

No, they care only for the things you can do for them.

Even if you have shared special experiences, 

They only care for the things you can do, and not about you.

Because I'm the quiet one,

Must I be shunned?

2 People certainly think of me in that way.

I'm simply the one who pays for everything.

The private whispers of careful,

little,

best friends,

In their

careful,

little,

worlds,

Then you, cold and alone.

No whispers to share,

No smiles to exchange.

No hugs to be given.

My insides have become a barren wasteland,

With a cold heart inside,

A heart that was once warm and joyful,

But is now protected by ice.

I will never love,

or be loved,

by another person,

ever again.

 

© 2010 Allison


Author's Note

Allison
This is about my "friends" Breanna and Ana. They leave me out of every thing, though I was the one that first introduced them to each other...

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It's very sad when you can't depend on your friends to be there for you unconditionally, you deserve better...don't worry friends come and friends go. you will always have friends here on writer's cafe

Posted 15 Years Ago


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This is an amazing poem. The concept is great concept for a poem and you perfected this. Good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I like this,
I've been trying to write something with a similar theme for a while,
I know just how you feel,
Shane,
=]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, it's ok Allison! If they're leaving you out, than it's their own loss. You are a smart and talented girl, and we'll always be friends.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its pretty good message to breanna and ana they betta read it and do something aout it

GOOD JOB!!!!!!!! KEEP UR HEAD UP like 2pac said


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g91YGe5ouqs

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on August 29, 2009
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Allison

Dinosaurland, HI



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Howdy.... Obviously I'm Allison...... I write a lot of poetry, annnnnd I've heard that I'm pretty sarcastic and awesome :-) Review my stuffs pease? :D more..

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