Lillith

 She creeps in the night.

She crawls through the window.

She wants to steal your children.

Succubus she is called,

But more importantly Lillith.

Her beauty is of a lotus blossom,

But her cunning and evil could draw you in.

She seduces men, and eats children.

Lillith Ah Lee.

Lillith stay away.

Lillith does not stay away.

She grows closer.

Every

Time

You 

Blink.

Author's Note

I was watching History channel, and saw this, Lillith is totally boss!
Ps: This was the only pic I could find of her where she's fully clothed....

Reviews

[M. Amphet Salt]

I don't know about Lilith being "Boss", but she is definately a dominate Jewish myth that Christians should have never removed from the original version of Genesis. You know the word lullaby is an edic of Lilith and, "hush little baby" is a phrase that is about 2,300 years old. Children, about 3 and older, were told that if Lilith heard them cry she would come steal their soul in their sleep.

I know tons about the Lilith myth. In my book , Lilith is the mother of one of my main characters; though I introduce her myth as the mother of evil in a different kind of way.

This is a good write. My only concern is with punctuation. Keep up the work. People like to buy books about blood sucking succubus'

[Sophia]

Lillith....isn't she one of the characters on the Sims 2? Lillith Pleasent?