Just wrote this and am putting something up because I feel like it and I miss writing and I like procrastinating my work. Sorry if this is crazy confusing, it's literally how my brain is right now. Basically, what it is would be similar to a text conversation I suppose, and then the italics are her/the authors' thoughts, and the indented sentences are the responses... Weird, I know.
Hope y'all have been doing well and let me know what you think!
My Review
Would you like to review this Poem? Login | Register
I did enjoy the poem.
"Life.
Messy, messy Life.
School, people, you know, the usual."
The above lines were my favorite. The words honest and direct. My favorite kind of poetry. I liked the ending to the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Coyote! I'm not too sure about how I feel about this poem, so it's good to know that you .. read moreThank you, Coyote! I'm not too sure about how I feel about this poem, so it's good to know that you like it. I think I liked the set up, but I'm not sure of how well it delivered the story. But thank you again for stopping by, reading and sharing your thoughts!
8 Years Ago
Poetry is about life. This poem was and you are welcome.
After reading your author's note I went back and read the story again and it made better sense. I like it. A lot of hidden anguish.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Yeah, my author's notes usually explain the craziness of my writing, haha! I'm glad you liked it, I .. read moreYeah, my author's notes usually explain the craziness of my writing, haha! I'm glad you liked it, I thought it was an interesting piece. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!
I wonder what would happen if you said what you were thinking... fuss and bother I suppose. I can relate to this. Well done for writing it down. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I'm glad it came across, that was my point- to share something that I'm feeling, but also that ever.. read moreI'm glad it came across, that was my point- to share something that I'm feeling, but also that everyone else has felt at some point in time, either in a friendship or romantic relationship.
I did enjoy the poem.
"Life.
Messy, messy Life.
School, people, you know, the usual."
The above lines were my favorite. The words honest and direct. My favorite kind of poetry. I liked the ending to the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Coyote! I'm not too sure about how I feel about this poem, so it's good to know that you .. read moreThank you, Coyote! I'm not too sure about how I feel about this poem, so it's good to know that you like it. I think I liked the set up, but I'm not sure of how well it delivered the story. But thank you again for stopping by, reading and sharing your thoughts!
8 Years Ago
Poetry is about life. This poem was and you are welcome.
I am 19 years old, I am majoring in political science, with a minor in military studies. I volunteer at a horse therapy center for people with disabilities, I'm on my college rowing team, and I love t.. more..