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A Poem by K.

  Hey!
           
            Hey

  How have you been?

            I've been good. How are you?

I can't say how I feel.
I can't say I feel like my heart is gone.
I can't say what I need to, that I miss you.
  I'm good. Busy, but good.

           Busy with what?

Life.
Messy, messy Life.
  School, people, you know, the usual.

           What happened?

Everything.
  Oh, nothing.
          
           Talk to me.
I can't.
It's you.
           Damn it, come on, tell me. 
I can't.
It's you.
           Hello?
I'm screaming, can't you hear?
           I'm coming over.
Don't.

© 2016 K.


Author's Note

K.
Just wrote this and am putting something up because I feel like it and I miss writing and I like procrastinating my work. Sorry if this is crazy confusing, it's literally how my brain is right now. Basically, what it is would be similar to a text conversation I suppose, and then the italics are her/the authors' thoughts, and the indented sentences are the responses... Weird, I know.

Hope y'all have been doing well and let me know what you think!

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I did enjoy the poem.
"Life.
Messy, messy Life.
School, people, you know, the usual."
The above lines were my favorite. The words honest and direct. My favorite kind of poetry. I liked the ending to the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote! I'm not too sure about how I feel about this poem, so it's good to know that you .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Poetry is about life. This poem was and you are welcome.



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After reading your author's note I went back and read the story again and it made better sense. I like it. A lot of hidden anguish.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.

8 Years Ago

Yeah, my author's notes usually explain the craziness of my writing, haha! I'm glad you liked it, I .. read more
I wonder what would happen if you said what you were thinking... fuss and bother I suppose. I can relate to this. Well done for writing it down. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.

8 Years Ago

I'm glad it came across, that was my point- to share something that I'm feeling, but also that ever.. read more
I did enjoy the poem.
"Life.
Messy, messy Life.
School, people, you know, the usual."
The above lines were my favorite. The words honest and direct. My favorite kind of poetry. I liked the ending to the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote! I'm not too sure about how I feel about this poem, so it's good to know that you .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Poetry is about life. This poem was and you are welcome.

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