I hope you get everything you deserve, the good and the bad.
I hope you take chances and meet your soulmate in a crazy way, maybe 'cause you both bought chocolate covered bananas, or 'cause you accidentally walked into the wrong restroom.
I hope you get to do all the things you wanted to do and accomplish all that you can.
I hope that you never get held back by what someone thinks and I hope you love everything with all your heart.
I hope you get heartbroken when you love the wrong person and when that happens, don't get cautious, learn from it and love again.
I hope you only do things that make you happy, and know when to walk away when something isn't benefitting you.
I hope you live a life that suits you and I hope you leave this world without any regrets.
I hope you feel pain and love and sadness and joy and are exhausted by it all, but realize that all those emotions and that exhaustion are all proof that you are living and have lived well.
I wrote this last night and I kind of liked it. I don't know how well I feel about it now, so it might not be up here for a long time. It would be great if y'all could also check out my last couple of uploads, because they haven't had any comments, and I would love some thoughts! Thank y'all, as always, for reading and reviewing.
My Review
Would you like to review this Poem? Login | Register
In football, there is that old cliché about "Leaving it all on the field."
Very few of us will ever walk across a chalk line on a beautifully manicured field of hybrid Bermuda grass, but we will be deft afoot in that obstacle course called "Life."
When we leave this world, when the very essence of our love is exhaled on our last breath, wouldn't it be wonderful to know that your one true love was there to inhale it in its fullest, and to hold it deep within their hearts until that day when you shall be joined again?
Leave no "I love you" left unsaid.
Leave no touch left unfelt.
Leave no smile left un-smiled.
Leave no questions left unanswered, and...
...Leave no love left unmade.
Leave it ALL on the field.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I love the connection between my poem and the football field, it matches so well. Thank you so much .. read moreI love the connection between my poem and the football field, it matches so well. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts, I appreciate it!
In football, there is that old cliché about "Leaving it all on the field."
Very few of us will ever walk across a chalk line on a beautifully manicured field of hybrid Bermuda grass, but we will be deft afoot in that obstacle course called "Life."
When we leave this world, when the very essence of our love is exhaled on our last breath, wouldn't it be wonderful to know that your one true love was there to inhale it in its fullest, and to hold it deep within their hearts until that day when you shall be joined again?
Leave no "I love you" left unsaid.
Leave no touch left unfelt.
Leave no smile left un-smiled.
Leave no questions left unanswered, and...
...Leave no love left unmade.
Leave it ALL on the field.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I love the connection between my poem and the football field, it matches so well. Thank you so much .. read moreI love the connection between my poem and the football field, it matches so well. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts, I appreciate it!
"I hope you live a life that suits you and I hope you leave this world without any regrets. " - this is all that matters in the end. In reality it's very difficult to leave this place without regrets.. But then again we should try. . Right? ..
I loved the child like innocence and honesty in this one. . Reminded me of someone. .
I hope you too get what you want. . A really good write :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Yes, you at least have to try! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
A closed book can't be read or can we learn it.
"I hope you feel pain and love and sadness and joy and are exhausted by it all, but realize that all those emotions and that exhaustion are all proof that you are living and have lived well."
The above statement is true. You must know laughter and tear to had a real life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Coyote! That is also my favorite line of the poem. Than.. read moreThank you so much for reading and reviewing, Coyote! That is also my favorite line of the poem. Thanks again, it's greatly appreciated.
I like this, these are nice hopes to say to a loved one xD I don't know about the bathroom though, lol I don't know if I would wanna hope that for someone xD I like how you hope for the good and bad, because through struggles we can learn and grow and also appreciate the good times in our lives.
Good Job
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you! And I was just trying to show some humor through the bathroom thing, haha! I mean it woul.. read moreThank you! And I was just trying to show some humor through the bathroom thing, haha! I mean it would be an interesting way to meet someone!! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it.
10 Years Ago
You're welcome and well it worked xD it made me chuckle, and yes it would be very interesting and sh.. read moreYou're welcome and well it worked xD it made me chuckle, and yes it would be very interesting and shocking xD hopefully when they are not using the restroom lol and You're welcome again
I am 19 years old, I am majoring in political science, with a minor in military studies. I volunteer at a horse therapy center for people with disabilities, I'm on my college rowing team, and I love t.. more..