Through The Eyes

Through The Eyes

A Poem by K.

 Through the eyes of a child,

all is well,

all is right,

all is big,

all is the right-now,

and all is new and curious,

but not all is kind.

 Through the eyes of an adult,

all is suspicious,

all is the past, the present, and the future,

all is cruel until proven safe,

all is a risk

but not all is really that way.

 Through the eyes of the elderly,

all is back then,

all is family and memories,

all is smiles and grandchildren

and the person you’ve been with for years,

all is love,

and that’s exactly how it should be.

© 2013 K.


Author's Note

K.
Sorry, sorry, sorry I have not been on in ages! I have been super busy with dance and school and extra stuff! I haven't even had the time, or energy, to write anything good. Just came up with this and am posting it as a check-in. How are y'all? Thanks for reading.

[picture has nothing to do with the poem, as usual]

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I like the "adult" portion Yeah, they're always getting lost somewhere into past (in memories), in present (into infatuated days/moments) and in future (in the worry of having love that's not even ever found). Ah~What a phenomenal job you've done! Loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Adams

9 Years Ago

Who? The guy?
K.

9 Years Ago

I was referring to the story, my bad hah.
Adam Adams

9 Years Ago

Lol...
Anyway.. Guess, it's time to go so.. see ya, Texas beauty!



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I like the "adult" portion Yeah, they're always getting lost somewhere into past (in memories), in present (into infatuated days/moments) and in future (in the worry of having love that's not even ever found). Ah~What a phenomenal job you've done! Loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Adams

9 Years Ago

Who? The guy?
K.

9 Years Ago

I was referring to the story, my bad hah.
Adam Adams

9 Years Ago

Lol...
Anyway.. Guess, it's time to go so.. see ya, Texas beauty!
A lovely write...Thank you for sharing...:)..............

Posted 11 Years Ago


K.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)............
You put this together so well. You explained life through it's stages from young to old in a truthful manner I totally agree with. Great writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
That's okay, I haven't been on for awhile either. But I'm back now and catching up on my RRs. I'm also writing again.

Very nice little poem. "... all is suspicious" is so true! I'm suspicious of everything anymore. And I like "and the person you’ve been with for years, all is love," It will be 33 years this November.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.

11 Years Ago

Hey, Craig! That's great. Hopefully when I actually have time I'll be able to catch up on some of yo.. read more
A nice piece on perspective. I liked it Kassie.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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