~~Confusion~~

~~Confusion~~

A Poem by bonbon7810
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I'm not sure to call it free form, but I'm not sure what it would be!

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Confusion is understanding when you don't want to.

Confusion is wondering about something you'll never be able to figure out.

Confusion is being curious even when it might end in the worst.

Confusion is thinking you understand,but you don't.

All in all, confusion leaves you with one thing more confusion.

 

© 2010 bonbon7810


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bonbon7810
Comment!!!! And if you know what form of poetry this would be let me know!

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Again, anticlimactic ending, however, in this case, it's that the last line doesn't quite make much sense. Mainly for you tried to end in "confusion", when you should have been a bit more witty than that and ended the poem in "confused" (a word of the same family, but different than the repeated word). Fiddle with that a little, see how it turns out. Well done!

(and this is pretty much Free Verse, if I've ever read such)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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