I like cinquains because I like languages and in French, cinq is five, in Italien, cinque is five too. Also in French bonbon means lolly, that's what drew me to your page, my love of languages! I like the simple and happy words used in this poem, although I though in a cinquain, the type you have used, says you need only one word for the last one, otherwise, it is great. Nice and simple then some things on here, it gives me a headache sometimes!
** I literally wrote all of this & my writing when I was in middle school...*I have always loved stories and books ever since I was like six months old and my mom would read to me, so it is no surpris.. more..