Clouds!

Wrote after a long night of being sick at a hotel. I wrote it on the car ride home this morning!

Clouds clouds passing by

Gives me hope

Which makes me sigh

 

Clouds clouds passing by

So beautiful

I wonder why

 

Clouds clouds passing by

Making shapes

Up in the sky

Reviews

[natelchyn]

Great!!!!

[bonbon7810]

Thanks!

[eccath]

Wow, nice rhyme scheme!! :) That' good! I could really here your poetic voice through this, and such a positive one! :)