The big desicison

Not finished yet!

 

        I walked through the revolving doors. I knew this was going to be too hard, too many children and I oculd only help one. I'm still going to do this, I will still adopt a child, I thought. Then a small hand reached up from a puny cot and put her tiny,tan hand up aginst my large,pale hand.

 

         I knew she wanted me to adopt her, but was she right for me. I was thinking of adopting a new born baby. Right then the orphanage director walked into ask me if I had and preferences on the age or gender of my child. " Looks like little Kara there is quite fond of you. Do you think you might want to adopt her. It looked like the little two year old child nodded slightly.

 

      "I think I'll sleep on the idea and come back tomorrow." I said. I walked back home to my apartment. I barely slept a minute that night. I kept replaying that moment over and over again in my head. The small hand reaching up. The cold fingers pressed against my palm. What should I do? I thought.

 

    Ba-ring! Ba-ring! " Ugh!" I moaned. "Why does morning come so quicly?" I slowly dragged myself out from under the covers. I wasn't ready for the choice I would have to make. I ate a mall breakfast and put on clothes that looked business-like. Then I took a taxi to the orpahnage.

Reviews

[bonbon7810]

Okay I will have a prologue

[eccath]

That's good!! :) Keep writing, and I would probably go more into detail about why she is adopting and how she decided to adopt and stuff, not just jump right into it. :) Don;t take it personally, because I think this is a great story line! :)