fail

fail

A Poem by V M Smith

i don't know what i'm doing

i promise


try to talk all smooth

try to listen well

try so hard to prove

that i can tell


when you're making fun

how to make you smile

when it's okay to laugh

and when


but i fail so much

thank you for letting me fail

and not just walking away

© 2013 V M Smith


Author's Note

V M Smith
I fully appreciate reviews, especially when they tear apart my work in an attempt to make it better. Rip, tea, break it down. Tell me how you do not like it, how to make it better. I want your opinion. Truly.

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Added on November 15, 2011
Last Updated on August 9, 2013
Tags: want, need, poem, love, relationship, unstable, fun, friends, lgbt, queer, lesbian, gay

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i'm not a writer; i am a liar. i sometimes write far too specifically; i sometimes write so vague even i lose track of what it is i'm on about. i tend to write when i can't think. this seems to be.. more..

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